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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 86 :D
PostPosted: Fri 10th August, 2012, 2:49 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 86 :D
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I LOVE THIS STORY! It's awesome how well you write their characters and personalities


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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 86 :D
PostPosted: Sun 12th August, 2012, 8:07 pm 
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Amazing! :)

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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 86 :D
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i assume you guys all hate me?
sorry i havent posted in (literally) FOREVER but with going to a new school and everything i got busy.
anyway enjoy ^.^

Chapter 87: Protection

Drake smirked satisfied with what had happened.
Jane frowned, “He seems mean, I don’t think he has many friends.”
Diana smiled, “We are his friends.” Diana pointed out, glancing at Caine.
Jane chocked slightly on her food. “Seriously? Him? He seems crazy why would you be friends with him?”
Diana shrugged, “He is entertaining.”
Diana stood up and cupped her hands around her mouth, “Drake!” she called.
Drake smirked when he saw Diana. Walking towards her and Caine, he noticed a girl next to them who seemed angry with what Diana had done.
Diana smiled when Drake walked up to them; Caine avoided eye contact.
“Hey Drake!” Diana said ridiculously cheerfully.
“Hey,” Drake said, bored.
“I hope attacking that kid was worth it, they are going to ship you off to Coates now.” Diana pointed out.
“Im fine with that, at least at Coates I can do that and he would know better than to scream.”
Diana nodded, “True, but it’s a lot better out here than back there.”
Drake frowned, “Caine who did you get paired up with?”
“My brother.” Jane quickly said.
Drake grinned, “Wait you two are living in the same house?” he said, to Diana and Caine, almost laughing. “Wow, principal is sicker than I thought for putting you two together.”
Jane frowned, “Well, twins are usually paired up together.”
Drake paused, “Twins?”
Diana nodded, “Yea, me and Caine remember.”
Drake grinned, “That is so wrong, and I think illegal.” He said to himself.
Jane frowned, “What do you mean?”
“These two have been going out for years now.”
Jane looked shocked, “What! You two are dating! That is beyond disgusting, you are related! Oh my god that is just-”
Diana covered Jane's mouth, “Shut up, we are not exactly twins, or related.”
Jane glared at Diana as she removed her hand.
“You two are dating and they assigned you in the same house? Why would they do that?”
Diana shrugged, “It was probably an accident.”
Caine noticed everyone was watching them since no one was crazy enough to interact with the ‘crazy kid who attacked someone’.
“Why did you attack someone?” Caine asked.
Drake shrugged, “I don’t know.”
Caine glared at him, “Do not do anything when you get back to Coates, at least try not to screw up anything else.” Caine snapped.
Diana raised an eyebrow, she didn’t get why Caine was so mad at him, especially since Drake always did this. She supposed it was because he didn’t have the protection he usually did from Caine and would not stroll out of this with ease. There were real consequences here, ones Caine couldn’t control and Drake had quickly messed up without thinking about what could happen. So Caine couldn’t help but snap at him for everything he said.
“Drake!” a teacher called, running up to him and holding his arms.
Diana smiled, “Relax we were just talking.”
The teacher led him away and towards a parking lot. Diana watched as a cop car drove up and opened the back door. Drake got in and soon they were leaving.

Principal Byron talked on the phone with Principal Callaghan, who argued the remainder of his students should leave too since this incident made him unsure of his decision to pair up with the school.
Principal Callaghan was actually unsure how to handle Drake without Caine controlling him and knew a released Drake was hazardous to anyone in a three-mile radius. So he fought, strongly recommending his student come back.
However, since he couldn’t bring back all of the student who had left and only needed the one, he was denied and instead they would come back in five days.

Penny was walking through the halls when she heard the news. Drake had attacked someone and now he had to come back to Coates. Penny was disappointed that Caine wouldn’t also be coming back, and worried for the people Drake would hurt since Caine wouldn’t be keeping him busy. But Penny wasn’t afraid of Drake, since she had joined Caine and his group she had his protection and Drake couldn’t hurt her, but did his protection count if he wasn’t here?


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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 87 (finally)
PostPosted: Mon 27th August, 2012, 7:58 am 
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I could never hate you <3 great chappy as always <3


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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 87 (finally)
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I love how the principal needs Caine for Drake xD


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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 87 (finally)
PostPosted: Mon 27th August, 2012, 11:01 pm 
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well i hate you slightly, your going to have to make it up with a lot of chapters :P
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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 87 (finally)
PostPosted: Sun 2nd September, 2012, 11:46 pm 
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Chapter 88: The return to coates

Diana sat in Caine’s current room after school. Jane’s parents were still at work and her brother had sports practice so the house was ridiculously quiet. Jane kept her distance after Diana had shown recognition of Drake. It made Jane think twice about how the boy who was attacked didn’t really know his buddy and that neither did Jane.
Diana whispered because she didn’t want to break the silence. Caine was angry at Drake so he would nod and occasionally speak.
“I doubt Principal Callaghan will get too mad at Drake, what did he expect to happen its Drake. He should have expected it when he agreed to send Drake.”
Caine nodded. “I need to be at Coates to make sure he doesn’t do anything else stupid.”
“Caine even when you are at Coates Drake does stupid stuff.”
“Maybe I can prevent some stupidity.”
Diana laughed, “Good luck.”
The silence made it feel awkward and like there weren’t enough people in the small city.
Jane burst through the door scaring Diana enough to make her nearly fall off the bed hadn’t it been for Caine quickly grabbing her.
“What are you two doing,” Jane said quickly.
Caine frowned, “Talking?”
Jane nodded, “I needed to make sure you two weren’t…well, uh you weren’t, you know…”
Diana raised an eyebrow, “Seriously?”
Caine shook his head, “Talking, only.”
Jane nodded, “So…what about?”
“Drake.”
“That crazy kid who was sent to jail? For attacking someone?”
Diana nodded, “That’s our best friend.” Diana said sarcastically.
Jane raised an eyebrow, “Seriously? Aren’t you afraid he might like kill you or something?”
“Danger is fun,” Diana whispered seductively. She smirked and left the room.
Jane stared at Caine as he watched Diana leave.
“Well I defiantly feel stupid.” Jane laughed.
Caine frowned, “Why?”
“Well believe it or not, I sort of had a crush on you.” Jane said blushing.
Caine smiled, “Yea, I could sort of tell.”
Jane smiled, “But it makes more sense now.”
Caine frowned, confused.
“You didn’t fight enough, not even close. Plus whenever you look at her you sort of get this, well, look.”
“This look?”
“Yea, you look at her like she is the only person in the room. At first I thought you spaced out a lot but it makes sense now.”
Caine grinned, “She is hard to not notice.”

Drake glared at the Coates building as the cop drove up.
Everyone looked alarmed when they saw the car.
The cop opened the door and helped Drake out of the car.
Walking with the handcuffed boy, the police officer led Drake towards the building. Some people stared, others looked impressed, like they expected Drake to get arrested. Or impressed because he didn’t seem at all worried, or anything besides bored.
Some people would smirk and whisper to others that they knew Drake wouldn’t make it more than a few days before screwing it up and getting thrown back in jail, even if the jail was also called Coates.
The principal walked outside and greeted the police officer, a stern look on his face.
“Sir, Mr. Merwin attacked a classmate during school. He was choked and currently has several bruises and injuries on his neck. I expect this will be taken care of but if Mr. Rea’s family decides to press charges he will be found guilty.”
Principal Callaghan nodded, “I will take care of this issue and see to it that Mr. Merwin is remorseful for his actions and he personally addresses this issue by apologizing to Mr. Rea until he accepts and will be punished in a manner I, and Mr. Rea, see fit.”
The police officer nodded, “I expect you will,” he glared at Drake, “and I expect a report soon. Mr. Merwin, is there anything you would like to add, or say regarding this matter?”
Drake returned the glare, “I can apologize all you want, but good luck making me mean it.”
“Mr. Merwin!” Principal Callaghan said, “My office, now.”
“His handcuffs,” the officer pointed out, “shouldn’t I take them off?”
Principal Callaghan frowned, “I’d prefer they stay on, if you don’t mind officer.”
The cop nodded and handed the principal the keys to the cuffs and got in his car and left.
Drake frowned, “But-”
“Mr. Merwin this is a serious manner, if Mr. Rea decided to press charges this could become a serious manner in which you could face time in jail.”
Drake shrugged, “You know jail actually isn’t as bad as you would think it is.” He grinned.
Principal Callaghan narrowed his eyes, “I mean for more than days, this could be for months.”
Drake didn’t seem to care, “So do I seriously have to keep these on?” he said, referring to the handcuffs.
“Yes,” the principal said through gritted teeth.
Holding his arm, the principal led Drake into the building and to his office.


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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 88
PostPosted: Mon 3rd September, 2012, 1:40 am 
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Caine has a sense of duty cute <3

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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 88
PostPosted: Tue 4th September, 2012, 12:27 pm 
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this so so awesome! i hope it never finishes!!!!


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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 88
PostPosted: Wed 5th September, 2012, 10:14 pm 
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Caine is so serious! But it makes sense since he is the only one who thinks things through :P
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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 88
PostPosted: Fri 7th September, 2012, 7:44 pm 
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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 88
PostPosted: Sun 9th September, 2012, 8:00 am 
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Can I just say that I LOVELOVELOVE Diana? Hahaha keep updating!(:


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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 88
PostPosted: Fri 14th September, 2012, 3:44 pm 
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i have can pinky promise this story wont be ending soon :P

Chapter 89: Consquences
Bianca Hilson talked with her husband, Zach, about the incident that happened that day at their children’s school. A boy from Coates attacked another student.
Bianca was worried for her own children’s safety, but when Jane told her that it was Diana and Caine’s friend, she decided it would be better if they were sent back to their school, where everyone would be safer.
She called the school, “Hi, this is Mrs. Hilson. Diana Ladris and Caine Soren are currently staying with me and my children and I wanted them to be brought back to Coates. Nothing bad has happened yet, but I don’t want to take any chances, I would prefer if they were taken tomorrow.”

Drake sat down in a chair in Principal Callaghan’s office. It was awkward since his arms were behind him and he had to bend his elbow to fit, which also made his spine hurt from the metal cuffs.
“So are you going to take these off later today or were you serious about leaving these on?” Drake asked.
Principal Callaghan glared at the blonde. “Mr. Merwin this is serious and I want you to show remorse and want to apologize to Eric Rea, he had shown you hospitality and kindness but you replied with anger and violence, don’t you feel bad at all?”
Drake frowned, pretending to think.
“Mr. Merwin, this behavior is not acceptable and must be dealt with and I expect you to resolve this because if you do not do so then we will try again and again until you do.”
Drake raised an eyebrow, “So either I apologize now or I apologize later?”
Principal Callaghan nodded, “And later means that you will go through unpleasant tasks before you agree, so lets make this easier and you do this now, ok?”
The phone rang on his desk.
“Hello?” he said into the phone.
“Oh hello Mrs. Hilson!” he said, “Ms. Ladris-”
The woman on the phone continued talking before he could speak.
“Tomorrow? Wait, hello?”
He put down the phone, quickly writing down the message.
Drake smirked, “So what did Diana do?”
“Mr. Merwin-”
“Because you should have at least seen this coming when you released the three of us-”
“This is not a prison for you to be released-”
“And it is only fair that Diana will also be ‘punished’ like I am for whatever she did, right?”
“Drake Merwin! I cannot discuss this with you! Your punishment will begin tomorrow unless you agree to apologize and fix this problem!”
Drake grinned, “I bet I can last longer than you.”
Principal Callaghan frowned.
“I don’t think it will take long before you give up, but I defiantly wont give up first.” He explained.

Drake walked around Coates, happy to be back.
He didn’t know where he was going, and he had nothing to do without Caine and Diana.
His eyes widened, remembering what Diana had done.
He rushed to his room, throwing his door open and alarming everyone he passed.
He opened the drawer his knifes usually were in, which he had emptied before he left and Diana stole.
He felt relaxed when he saw the red covered silver blades. Until he realized he was missing about half of his knifes, and his most prized possesion.

Diana looked pretty annoyed when they walked to school.
She had asked if they could ditch several times but always got a stern no from Jane, who frankly was the only one who wouldn’t let them.
“You know, its three against one-” Diana suggested, once again trying to get out of going to school.
“Diana.” Caine interrupted.
“Im just saying, we outnumber her and she is the only one making us go to school.” Diana pointed out.
Chris smiled, “When we get to school we can ditch Jane and sneak away, we can go to the movies or the mall or something,” he suggested.
“You have to admit that sounds much better than sitting in a math class.”

Mrs. Hilson snuck into the guest room of her own house after everyone had left, careful not to make a sound, acting like the slightest thing wrong would make a bomb go off. When she closed the door she sighed and finally saw the room.
It was very clean, the bed was done, and the suitcase of the dark haired boy was closed and nicely put in the corner, making it the only thing out of place in the entire room.
One would think he was polite and organized but Mrs. Hilson knew it was so he could leave at any moment, maybe even run away if he hurt anyone.
Ignoring her paranoia, she pulled the suitcase downstairs so the car could get their things as soon as possible.
Once in Jane’s room, she saw it was slightly different with the girl. Her slightly opened suitcase had a shirt pouring out, and a few things lay cluttered around and on her bag.
She grabbed everything she saw wasn’t Jane’s and tossed it toward the bag.
After getting everything she opened the suitcase, expecting to shove everything in when she nearly screamed.
Dozens of knifes lay inside, the majority covered in blood. Usually this would terrify her, but the gun lying in the middle was much worse.


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 Post subject: Re: Caine Diana Drake preFayz: chapter 89 :D
PostPosted: Fri 14th September, 2012, 4:50 pm 
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